The Revised Erra Pater

[Dice]

I have been working for some time now on a new, revised Erra Pater that summarizes the whole of the Davite faith in one book, including the afterlife, the creation story, etc.

I've finished a first draft, ready for comment and potential editing before I send it to the staff for final approval. I'd love to hear people's thoughts on the draft!

You can read it at:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ehl ... 2qjNs/edit

Table of Contents:

1. The Book of the Cosmos
2. King Dav ab Harmon, Saint of Saints
3. The Five Declarations and the Three Canonical Laws
4. The Nature of Sin
5. The cleansing of Sin
6. The Nature of Magery
7. The Good Davite's Response to Magery
8. The Signs of Witchcraft
9. The Nature of Good Works
10. The Book of Saints, Part I
11. The Book of Saints, Part II
12. The Nature of Prayer
13. The Ladder of Duties to the Faith

[Applesauce]

Are you able to enable comments on the document without enabling everyone to edit it? Or would you prefer we just comment in this thread?

[Dice]

I've enabled comments in the document. Comment here or there as you please!

[Voxumo]

Well after reading through it i must say i like it.. However i have to question the bit about Dav and his council.. I thought that was something only the highest members of the order would icly know about. Such as how there were at one time academies for mages and what not..

Besides that it is great and can't wait to see it implemented