TI Advertisements

[Kinaed]

Once again, I'm planning to put some money into advertising on TMC and a few other RP websites around the internet. I'm working on some banner ads with Jaeela, and we'll be paying an artist to help us come up with some artwork.

But where we're a bit stuck is on what to say in these pretty flash adverts. Suggestions would be lovely!

Generally, advertising should sell the benefits of a product or service and speak to the niche clientele they're seeking to capture the attention of. Here's a few things I whipped together, but am not sure how they'd play out. This being said, I'd love to have people improve these or give us a take of their own on what might be a good draw to getting people to come play TI:

POSSIBLE SEQUENCE FOR BANNER AD ...

Non-MUD, RPG site:
- Want an RPG with a non-linear storyline?
- Where your actions have life or death consequences?
- Where the other characters are better than just AI?
- Where the world is alive?
- Welcome to The Inquisition: Legacy - Feel the Burn

Another non-MUD, RPG site:
- Are you a hardcore roleplayer?
- Interested in trying something new?
- How about an interactive, multi-player storytelling?
- Telnet to ti-legacy.org 5050 and create a character
- 100% free!

Mudders or Mushers, perhaps WhiteWolf players?
- Are you a hardcore, online roleplayer?
- Tired of elves and dwarves/vampires and werewolves?
- Interested in high politics, danger, and a non-linear plot?
- Visit ti-legacy.com 5050, and create a character!
- 100% free!

Anything you might suggest?

[Empheba]

I like the "Feel the burn" slogan!

I think you should also definitely push the jpolitical and intrigue bit along with "real consequences to your actions", that is a nice selling point.
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Empheba

[Kinaed]

Thanks for the response. I'll forward the suggestion to Jaeela, who is putting together an advertising campaign for us!